Get on With It by Dave Weirdly
Originally when I came up with this ASTRO MONK story I wanted it to be a story of many stories. I wanted the stories to intertwine into one. I thought this would Illustrate my point that good and bad can be a point of view.
This page is transitional. It adds another view into the ASTRO MONK saga. The A.C.K. BOT zooms through the cosmos and some sort of GLOP starts bubbling around then the AWAKENER stumbles upon a planet of things to awaken.
I love this page but as a transition goes I think the change is a bit sudden. Particulary for the AWAKENER. I think The AWAKENER could have stood more drifting and contemplation in space.
The IMPATIENT GUY
I might have been impatient to move the story along faster. I was being the guy that twirls his fingers and says ” Come on get on with the story will Yah!” So my impatient guy won out and this is what I have . I think you still get it. I feel like it could have used another scene there. But I needed to move on and thats how these things go.
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